Module Example Version 2.05
This was my second resubmission to BioWare, which I submitted on the 3rd of August, 2009. I flew over for an interview on the 27th of August, so there's no written feedback for this one.
I had this module converted into a series of XML sheets linked using a PHP framework for Richard Dansky's Games Writing Critique Workshop at GDC Online 2010. I've since re-re-converted it into Twine format, which you can play here.
You can download the original module here. I've made some updates to the dialogue since I first wrote the module, so the downloadable version isn't as polished, but it gives visual context to the storyline.
I had this module converted into a series of XML sheets linked using a PHP framework for Richard Dansky's Games Writing Critique Workshop at GDC Online 2010. I've since re-re-converted it into Twine format, which you can play here.
You can download the original module here. I've made some updates to the dialogue since I first wrote the module, so the downloadable version isn't as polished, but it gives visual context to the storyline.